Extract · BaghDarBagh · Khalil Paknia’s archive

Wet Journey · archived extract

An impossible infant encounter turns a smile into a threat to the narrator.

Author
Ghazi Rabihavi
Publication
BaghDarBagh · Khalil Paknia’s archive
Source date
11 July 2012
Published language
Persian
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The short Persian novel passage was posted by Khalil Paknia.

Original English editorial orientation to the short archived Persian excerpt. The complete novel and its linked PDF are not represented by this fragment alone.

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The infant’s impossible movement

The infant’s head moves independently before joining its swaddled body again. The narrator tries to cover its smiling face, but the infant’s hands emerge and drive a blade into the point between the narrator’s eyebrows. Bodily contact, laughter and the narrator’s cry give the brief scene its violent intimacy. The posted passage begins and ends with omissions; it supplies no surrounding explanation or resolution. Source 1

The notice and the later resemblance

The 11 July 2012 post explicitly calls Wet Journey a novel. Its accompanying notice names a first BaghDarBagh edition in Stockholm, Summer 2012. The post date is distinct from that seasonal edition date, and the notice does not establish an ISBN or page count. The publication record preserves those limits. Source 1

The infant and the wound between the eyebrows also occur in the opening of the later Daniel and His Father extract. That opening develops the scene differently and explicitly identifies a nightmare. The resemblance can be followed across the two fragments, but it does not establish that the novels are the same work, that one is a revision of the other, or that their complete editions share the same text. Source 1 · Source 2

Sources & credits

  1. Wet Journey · archived BaghDarBagh extract

    Original retained source 296: 11 July 2012 post by Khalil Paknia, paragraphs 797–817; the short literary passage is 803. The accompanying notice labels Wet Journey a novel and names a first edition, BaghDarBagh, Stockholm, Summer 2012. The linked complete PDF was not independently inspected. The infant encounter resembles the opening of the later Daniel and His Father extract, but the resemblance establishes neither work identity nor a revision history.

  2. Daniel and His Father · novel extract · extended reading evidence

    Baang, 9 May 2024. Original source 332, literary body paragraphs 79–557; the dossier caption at 265 and illustration credit at 387 are excluded. Paragraph 77 identifies an extract supplied by publisher Jalal Rostami. All observations concern this fragment, rather than the complete novel. The website sections are original English editorial orientations; literary passages are not reproduced.